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Unit 9 · Topic 9.5

9.5 Multiple perspectives and a narrator who changes

Longer works often show the same events through several characters' or narrators' eyes. A narrator can also change over the course of a story through what they do and experience. Shifts or inconsistencies in a narrator's perspective create irony and complexity.

Key terms

  • multiple perspectives
  • narrator
  • retrospective narrator
  • irony
  • inconsistency

Multiple perspectives on the same events

When a novel gives you more than one view, compare them. Each perspective is shaped by what that person knows, wants and fears. Mary Shelley's Frankenstein (1818) lets both Victor and the creature tell their stories. Victor describes the creature as a "wretch" and a "devil." The creature describes years of rejection and loneliness and says, "I was benevolent and good; misery made me a fiend." Neither version cancels the other. Together they make the question of blame much harder.

The retrospective narrator

A retrospective narrator tells their story looking back, from a later point in life. That creates two versions of the same person: the younger self who lived the events and the older self who tells them. The gap between them is a source of irony and of meaning.

Pip, the narrator of Great Expectations (1861), is an older man looking back. When he describes how he came to be ashamed of the forge and of Joe, the older Pip judges the younger one: "It is a most miserable thing to feel ashamed of home. There may be black ingratitude in the thing." The young Pip couldn't see this; the older Pip can't stop seeing it.

Charlotte Brontë's Jane Eyre (1847) also uses an adult narrator looking back at her childhood, and she sometimes speaks straight to us: "Reader, I married him."

Change and inconsistency as irony

When a narrator's perspective shifts, compare their earlier and later statements. A narrator who once praised something and now condemns it, or who claims to be fair but clearly isn't, creates irony: a gap between what is said and what is true, or between what the narrator knew then and knows now.

Ask: How does the narrator describe themselves at different points? Do they admit their earlier mistakes? Are there places where the older narrator still seems blind? Inconsistencies can show growth, or they can show that the narrator hasn't changed as much as they believe.

Questions to ask

  • Whose perspective controls this chapter or scene, and whose is missing?
  • Where do two perspectives describe the same event differently?
  • Is the narrator telling the story as it happens or looking back? How far back?
  • Where does the older narrator comment on the younger self, and what tone do they use?
  • Does the narrator's view at the end match their view at the beginning?

Worked examples

Try each one yourself first, then open the solution.

  1. Example 1

    Analyzing a narrator who has changed

    In Great Expectations, the older Pip writes: "Home had never been a very pleasant place to me, because of my sister's temper. But, Joe had sanctified it, and I had believed in it." He lists what he once "believed in": the parlor, the front door, the kitchen, the forge. Then: "Within a single year all this was changed. Now it was all coarse and common." Explain how the gap between the younger and older Pip creates meaning.

    Show the solution
    1. Step 1: Separate the two selves: the younger Pip, after visiting Miss Havisham's house, now sees home as "coarse and common." The older Pip is telling us this years later.
    2. Step 2: Look at the repetition: "I had believed in" repeats, making the lost faith sound almost religious, and "sanctified" supports that.
    3. Step 3: Find the older narrator's judgment: the chapter opens by calling this shame "a most miserable thing" and "black ingratitude."
    4. Step 4: Explain the irony: the younger Pip thinks he is rising; the older Pip knows he was falling. The gap shows how class ambition corrupted what mattered.

    Answer: Sample answer: Dickens uses the distance between the younger and older Pip to show how ambition can poison love. The repeated phrase "I had believed in," along with the word "sanctified," turns Joe's humble home into something holy in memory, so its sudden fall into "coarse and common" feels like a loss of faith. The younger Pip believes he has simply outgrown the forge, but the older narrator frames the change as "black ingratitude." The irony belongs to the retrospective voice: we watch a boy feel he is rising in the world while the man he became tells us that this was the moment he began to lose himself.

Common mistakes

  • Treating the older narrator's judgments as the younger character's thoughts. Keep the two selves separate.
  • Choosing one character's perspective as "the truth" when the work gives you several.
  • Missing irony that comes from the gap between what a narrator knew then and knows now.

On the exam

  • Multiple-choice questions may ask how a narrator's later comment changes the meaning of an earlier one, or what the shift between two perspectives suggests. Look for verbs in different tenses and phrases like "I now see" or "at the time."
  • In the literary argument essay, a narrator's development across the work can give you a clear line of reasoning from beginning to end.

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Check yourself

4 questions on 9.5 Multiple perspectives and a narrator who changes. Pick an answer to see if you got it, and why.

Paragraph 1
As I said this I suddenly beheld the figure of a man, at some distance, advancing towards me with superhuman speed. He bounded over the crevices in the ice, among which I had walked with caution; his stature, also, as he approached, seemed to exceed that of man. I was troubled; a mist came over my eyes, and I felt a faintness seize me, but I was quickly restored by the cold gale of the mountains. I perceived, as the shape came nearer (sight tremendous and abhorred!) that it was the wretch whom I had created. I trembled with rage and horror, resolving to wait his approach and then close with him in mortal combat. He approached; his countenance bespoke bitter anguish, combined with disdain and malignity, while its unearthly ugliness rendered it almost too horrible for human eyes. But I scarcely observed this; rage and hatred had at first deprived me of utterance, and I recovered only to overwhelm him with words expressive of furious detestation and contempt.
Paragraph 2
“Devil,” I exclaimed, “do you dare approach me? And do not you fear the fierce vengeance of my arm wreaked on your miserable head? Begone, vile insect! Or rather, stay, that I may trample you to dust! And, oh! That I could, with the extinction of your miserable existence, restore those victims whom you have so diabolically murdered!”
Paragraph 3
“I expected this reception,” said the dæmon. “All men hate the wretched; how, then, must I be hated, who am miserable beyond all living things! Yet you, my creator, detest and spurn me, thy creature, to whom thou art bound by ties only dissoluble by the annihilation of one of us. You purpose to kill me. How dare you sport thus with life? Do your duty towards me, and I will do mine towards you and the rest of mankind. If you will comply with my conditions, I will leave them and you at peace; but if you refuse, I will glut the maw of death, until it be satiated with the blood of your remaining friends.”
Paragraph 4
“Abhorred monster! Fiend that thou art! The tortures of hell are too mild a vengeance for thy crimes. Wretched devil! You reproach me with your creation, come on, then, that I may extinguish the spark which I so negligently bestowed.”
Paragraph 5
My rage was without bounds; I sprang on him, impelled by all the feelings which can arm one being against the existence of another.
Paragraph 6
He easily eluded me and said,
Paragraph 7
“Be calm! I entreat you to hear me before you give vent to your hatred on my devoted head. Have I not suffered enough, that you seek to increase my misery? Life, although it may only be an accumulation of anguish, is dear to me, and I will defend it. Remember, thou hast made me more powerful than thyself; my height is superior to thine, my joints more supple. But I will not be tempted to set myself in opposition to thee. I am thy creature, and I will be even mild and docile to my natural lord and king if thou wilt also perform thy part, the which thou owest me. Oh, Frankenstein, be not equitable to every other and trample upon me alone, to whom thy justice, and even thy clemency and affection, is most due. Remember that I am thy creature; I ought to be thy Adam, but I am rather the fallen angel, whom thou drivest from joy for no misdeed. Everywhere I see bliss, from which I alone am irrevocably excluded. I was benevolent and good; misery made me a fiend. Make me happy, and I shall again be virtuous.”
Paragraph 8
“Begone! I will not hear you. There can be no community between you and me; we are enemies. Begone, or let us try our strength in a fight, in which one must fall.”
Paragraph 9
“How can I move thee? Will no entreaties cause thee to turn a favourable eye upon thy creature, who implores thy goodness and compassion? Believe me, Frankenstein, I was benevolent; my soul glowed with love and humanity; but am I not alone, miserably alone? You, my creator, abhor me; what hope can I gather from your fellow creatures, who owe me nothing? They spurn and hate me. The desert mountains and dreary glaciers are my refuge. I have wandered here many days; the caves of ice, which I only do not fear, are a dwelling to me, and the only one which man does not grudge. These bleak skies I hail, for they are kinder to me than your fellow beings. If the multitude of mankind knew of my existence, they would do as you do, and arm themselves for my destruction. Shall I not then hate them who abhor me? I will keep no terms with my enemies. I am miserable, and they shall share my wretchedness. Yet it is in your power to recompense me, and deliver them from an evil which it only remains for you to make so great, that not only you and your family, but thousands of others, shall be swallowed up in the whirlwinds of its rage. Let your compassion be moved, and do not disdain me. Listen to my tale; when you have heard that, abandon or commiserate me, as you shall judge that I deserve. But hear me. The guilty are allowed, by human laws, bloody as they are, to speak in their own defence before they are condemned. Listen to me, Frankenstein. You accuse me of murder, and yet you would, with a satisfied conscience, destroy your own creature. Oh, praise the eternal justice of man! Yet I ask you not to spare me; listen to me, and then, if you can, and if you will, destroy the work of your hands.”

Mary Shelley, Frankenstein, Chapter 10 (1831 edition). Victor Frankenstein is the narrator.

Question 1 of 4

In paragraph 1, Victor’s description of the creature’s “unearthly ugliness” is shaped chiefly by

Question 2 of 4

The creature’s speeches in paragraphs 7 and 9 complicate Victor’s narration chiefly by

Question 3 of 4

The creature’s statement “I ought to be thy Adam, but I am rather the fallen angel, whom thou drivest from joy for no misdeed” (paragraph 7) draws on the biblical story of creation and the fall to suggest that

Question 4 of 4

The creature’s exclamation “Oh, praise the eternal justice of man!” (paragraph 9) is best described as

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