AP® English Language and Composition review sheet from Aim for Five (aimforfive.com/lang/units/5/5-4)
Unit 5 · Topic 5.4
5.4 Transitions that guide the reader
Transitions are words, phrases, clauses, sentences or even whole paragraphs that show how ideas relate. Choosing the transition that matches the actual relationship, such as contrast, cause, example or concession, is one of the most common writing questions on the exam.
Key terms
- transition
- logical relationship
- contrast transition
- cause-and-effect transition
What transitions do
A transition tells readers how the next idea connects to the last one. It can be a single word (however), a phrase (for example), a clause (although the cost is high), a sentence ("Cost is only half the problem") or a whole paragraph that pivots the argument. Transitions create coherence between sentences, between paragraphs and between larger sections. They can also introduce evidence and show how it relates to the claim.
Transitions by relationship
| Relationship | Transitions |
|---|---|
| Addition | also, in addition, moreover, furthermore |
| Contrast | however, but, yet, on the other hand, in contrast |
| Concession | although, admittedly, granted, even though |
| Cause and effect | because, therefore, as a result, consequently, so |
| Example | for example, for instance, in particular, consider |
| Emphasis | indeed, in fact, above all, especially |
| Sequence or time | first, then, later, meanwhile, finally |
| Similarity | similarly, likewise, in the same way |
| Conclusion | thus, in short, ultimately |
Transitions that introduce evidence
Transitions also bring evidence into your writing and show its relationship to your claim. "For instance" presents an example; "According to Source C" credits a source; "As Lincoln puts it" introduces a quotation; "Even more telling" ranks one piece of evidence above another. These small phrases tell readers what the evidence is doing before they read it.
Choosing the right one
Decide on the relationship first, then pick the word. Read the sentences on either side of the gap and ask: does the second idea add to the first, contradict it, result from it, illustrate it or concede something? Only then choose a transition. A transition that signals the wrong relationship is worse than none, because it actively misleads readers.
Between paragraphs, a transitional sentence usually works better than a single word. It links the idea just finished to the idea starting: "Even if fines raised real money, they would still drive away the families libraries most need to reach."
Don't overuse them, either. When two sentences already connect clearly, a transition adds clutter.
Transitions in reading passages
When you read, transitions are signposts to the line of reasoning. A "But" or "Yet" at the start of a paragraph often marks the writer's turn from a view they reject to the one they hold. Reading questions about a shift in the passage often point to exactly these words.
Worked examples
Try each one yourself first, then open the solution.
- Example 1
Choosing transitions in a draft
Practice paragraph (written for this page). Choose a transition for each blank and explain why. "Many people assume that overdue fines make borrowers return books on time. (1) ___, when our county library dropped fines last year, its overall return rate barely changed. (2) ___, the Elm Street branch saw more books come back on time than before. (3) ___ fines did raise some money, the amount was small. (4) ___, the case for keeping fines is weaker than it first appears."
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- Step 1: Blank 1: the sentence contradicts the assumption in the first sentence. That's contrast: "However."
- Step 2: Blank 2: the sentence gives a specific case that goes even further than the sentence before it: one branch didn't just hold steady, it improved. That's an example with emphasis: "In fact" or "For instance."
- Step 3: Blank 3: the writer admits a point for the other side before moving on. That's concession: "Although."
- Step 4: Blank 4: the sentence sums up what the evidence adds up to. That's a conclusion: "Ultimately" or "Thus."
Answer: (1) However, (2) In fact, (3) Although, (4) Ultimately. Each transition matches the logical relationship between the ideas: contrast, emphasis through a specific example, concession, and conclusion.
Common mistakes
- Using "however" when the next idea adds to the last one instead of contrasting with it.
- Using "therefore" or "as a result" when the second idea doesn't actually follow from the first.
- Stacking transitions ("However, on the other hand, nevertheless").
- Relying only on "First," "Second" and "Finally," which show order but not logical relationships.
On the exam
- Transition questions are common in the multiple-choice writing sets. Cover the answer choices, decide the relationship yourself, then pick the word that names it.
- In your essays, transitions between paragraphs show the reader your line of reasoning, which helps you reach the higher Row B scores.
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4 questions on 5.4 Transitions that guide the reader. Pick an answer to see if you got it, and why.
Written for this practice set: two body paragraphs from a student's draft of a proposal to the school board.
The writer wants to begin sentence 8 with a transition that shows how it responds to sentence 7. Which choice is most effective?
Written for this practice set: a student's draft of a proposal from the student council.
The writer wants to combine sentences 11 and 12 so that the link between them is clear. Which version is most effective?
Robert Louis Stevenson, "An Apology for Idlers" (1877), collected in Virginibus Puerisque (1881). An "apology" here means a defense. Lord Macaulay was a famous historian who won top honors at school; the Lady of Shalott, from a poem by Tennyson, sees the world only in a mirror. A "burn" is a stream.
In paragraph 1, the sentence beginning "For though here and there a Lord Macaulay may escape" relates to the sentence before it by
In paragraph 2, the word "But" in the sentence that begins "But though I would not willingly part with such scraps of science" signals
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