Synthesis essay
Required personal finance course
- Units 6 and 7
- 6 points
- About 55 minutes
You read six sources on one issue, including two visuals with at least one chart or table, and write an argument that takes your own position and uses evidence from at least three of the sources. On this site a data table stands in for a visual source. On the exam: Question 1 of 3, required. Section II has 3 essays in 2 hours 15 minutes, including a 15-minute reading period, and is 55% of the score; each essay is worth 6 points on the same analytic rubric (thesis 1, evidence and commentary 4, sophistication 1). The exam is fully digital in Bluebook. Recommended: the 15-minute reading period for the sources, then about 40 minutes to write.
The question and its sources
Suggested time: 15 minutes to read the sources and plan, then 40 minutes to write.
A growing number of states now require high school students to complete a course in personal finance, covering topics such as budgeting, credit, loans, taxes and saving, before they graduate. Supporters see the course as essential preparation for adult life; skeptics question how much a single course changes behavior and what students give up to take it.
Read the six sources below carefully, including the introductory information for each one.
Source A (Franklin)
The following is excerpted from “The Way to Wealth,” an essay by Benjamin Franklin first published in 1758 as the preface to his Poor Richard's Almanack. In it, a character named Father Abraham gives advice to a crowd waiting for an auction of fine goods to begin, quoting sayings from Franklin's almanacs. A 'mickle' is a large amount.
You may think perhaps, that a little tea, or a little punch now and then, diet a little more costly, clothes a little finer, and a little entertainment now and then, can be no great matter; but remember, "Many a little makes a mickle." Beware of little expences; "A small leak will sink a great ship," as Poor Richard says; […]
But what madness it must be to run in debt for these superfluities? We are offered, by the terms of this sale, six months credit; and that, perhaps, has induced some of us to attend it, because we cannot spare the ready money, and hope now to be fine without it. But, ah! think what you do when you run in debt; you give to another power over your liberty […]
Source: Benjamin Franklin, “The Way to Wealth” (1758). Public domain; text from Project Gutenberg eBook #43855, Franklin's Way to Wealth; or, “Poor Richard Improved.”
Source B (Grant)
The following is excerpted from an article in which a high school economics teacher describes his former students, published in a state education journal.
Every spring, former students email me from college with the same kind of question. One signed up for a credit card at orientation to get a free T-shirt and now owes $1,900 at 27 percent interest. Another didn't know that her unsubsidized student loan was charging interest while she was still in school. These are not careless students. They are students who were never taught.
We require four years of English because adults need to read and write. Every adult also has to sign a lease, read a pay stub, file taxes and decide whether to borrow. A semester of personal finance is not a luxury; it is the one class that every single student will use, whether they go to college, join the military or start work the week after graduation.
Source: Written for this practice set; the writer and publication are invented.
Source C (Survey): Results of a financial knowledge quiz given to 18-year-olds in one state, by whether they had taken a personal finance course
| Quiz topic or survey item | Took a semester personal finance course | Did not take the course |
|---|---|---|
| How credit card interest builds up (answered correctly) | 71% | 43% |
| Gross pay versus net pay on a pay stub (answered correctly) | 84% | 58% |
| How a late payment affects a credit score (answered correctly) | 77% | 49% |
| Comparing two loan offers with different rates and terms (answered correctly) | 62% | 37% |
| Reported keeping a monthly budget | 38% | 31% |
Source: Hypothetical data, written for this practice set.
Source D (Vance)
The following is excerpted from a column by a researcher who studies consumer behavior.
Few people oppose teaching teenagers about money. The harder question is whether a course changes what they do years later, when they are actually choosing a car loan or a credit card. Here the research is less encouraging than the headlines. A widely cited 2014 review of more than 200 studies found that financial education had only small effects on later financial behavior, and that those effects faded with time. A 2022 review of 76 randomized experiments was more hopeful, finding real effects on both knowledge and behavior, though the effects on behavior were smaller.
The lesson is not that personal finance classes are worthless. It is that knowledge learned at sixteen is often gone by twenty-six. Financial education seems to work best when it arrives 'just in time,' close to a real decision. A required semester may help, but no one should expect it to protect young adults on its own.
Source: Written for this practice set; the writer and publication are invented.
Source E (Ruiz)
The following is excerpted from a letter to a state legislator from a high school counselor.
I don't doubt that personal finance matters. My concern is the schedule. Students have room for only so many courses in four years. When the state adds a required semester, something else comes out, and in practice it is usually an elective: a second year of a world language, an art class, a computer science course, a semester of band. For a student trying to complete an AP sequence or a career program, a new requirement can mean dropping the class that made them want to come to school.
If the state wants every student to learn personal finance, it should consider building those lessons into courses students already take, such as math, economics, even English, rather than adding another box to check.
Source: Written for this practice set; the writer and publication are invented.
Source F (Advertisement)
This source is a smartphone advertisement for a 'buy now, pay later' payment app, described here in words.
A smiling teenager holds up a pair of expensive sneakers. A large price tag reads '$180' with a line through it, and beside it, in bright green letters: 'or 4 easy payments of $45.' At the bottom of the ad, in much smaller gray type: 'Late fees may apply. Subject to approval.'
Source: A visual source described in words; written for this practice set.
Suggested time: 55 minutes
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The essay
6 pointsWrite an essay that synthesizes material from at least three of the sources and develops your position on whether high schools should require students to take a personal finance course to graduate. In your response you should do the following: • Write a thesis that takes a defensible position on the question. • Use evidence from at least three of the six sources to support your line of reasoning. Make clear which sources you use, by quoting, paraphrasing or summarizing them; you may cite them as Source A, Source B and so on, or by the descriptions in parentheses. • Explain how that evidence supports your line of reasoning. • Use grammar and punctuation that make your argument clear.
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